Feedback

The rest of the media group gave us some feedback on our roughcut

The overall view from the group is that we could improve by;

• Having a variety of shots
• Make the transitions sharper
• Make the shots less shakey
• Make it less dark at the end

We should change;

• The variety of shots
• 'The beginning'
• Give the other character something to do or not include him

What we still have to do;

• Cutaways
• More editting
• More Performance
• Re-do with strong light

The strengths of our music video were;

• Lipsynching is good
• Good effects
• Good use of locations
• Original
• Performer did a good job
• Black& White and One colour looks good.

We are pleased with the feedback from the group, and we will be trying to improve on the negative points that have been brought up about our roughcut video.Although on some of the points it is quite difficult to do so, for example with the points about it being dark towards the end it is hard to find a time where we can all film and it is still light as the clocks have been put back now so it gets darker earlier, and we finish college at 4.10pm.
However we will try to film in any frees that we have.